I think the intro of your annotated bibliography is working better than the one you wrote in class, except you need to connect the two paragraphs. What do standardized tests have to do with knowledge generation and creativity. Also, you need to work some of your sources (if only as parenthetical name drops) into your intro.
I think the intro of your annotated bibliography is working better than the one you wrote in class, except you need to connect the two paragraphs. What do standardized tests have to do with knowledge generation and creativity. Also, you need to work some of your sources (if only as parenthetical name drops) into your intro.
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