With this website, my partners and I were trying to emphasize the importance of literacy and why one should value each and every piece of it. So many people do not have the option to become literate and they miss out on so many opportunities. One must acquire the proper literacy sponsors to become literate and a lot of people will never have that. We included our own thoughts and stories of how we became literate and why feel it is important, and we also included other famous stories about people becoming literate even if it was difficult for them. One of the accomplishments of becoming literate is digging deep inside yourself and doing something a lot of people would of never believed you could. We argued that many people may be literate, but they don't always value it the way it should be valued. I believe the things that flow really well is our introduction, values section and conclusion. I feel as if our thoughts and point were conveyed correctly, but I also feel as if some parts can be switched around or more detailed. WIth the peer editing, we were able to correct some parts that we missed. We included more information into the introduction, used more sources for our values and literacy sponsors section, and overall tweaked the whole thing to make it better. I think that the peer editing was very helpful for us.
http://valueofliteracy.webs.com/
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